German composition : $b A theoretical and practical guide to the art of translating English prose into German · Hermann Lange
Chapter 5
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Crash!—a terrific cry broke from three hundred hearts. It was the cry (S. 16, N. 10) the people in the distant vessels of the king had faintly heard on the water. The White Ship had struck upon a rock, and was going down!
Fitz-Stephen hurried the prince into a boat with some few nobles. “Push off,” he whispered, “and row to the land. It is not far, and the sea is smooth. The rest of us must die.”
But, as they rowed away fast from the sinking ship, the prince heard the voice of his sister Mary calling for help. He (S. 5, N. 2) never in his life had been so good as he was then. He cried, in an agony: “Row back at any risk! I cannot bear to leave her!”
+Krach!—es erhob sich ein aus drei hundert Kehlen erschallender fürchterlicher Angstschrei.+
the people = one; in = upon.
faintly on the water, +unvollkommen von der See herüber+.
+und war im Sinken begriffen!+
to hurry into a boat, +schnell in ein Boot steigen lassen+; with = and.
+an+, contracted with the def. art.
+ruhig.+
The — us = We others.
Render ‘but’ by +jedoch+, which place before the adverb ‘fast’ (+schnell+); to row away, +sich entfernen+.
See S. 16, N. 4; for, +um+.
Say ‘as at (+in+) this moment’.
The remaining passage will greatly improve by placing the clause ‘Row — risk’ before the words ‘He — agony’. In an agony, +voll Seelenangst+; at any risk, +koste es, was es wolle+.
When there is in a principal clause a transitive verb, the object of which is contained in a following objective clause, which often assumes the form of a supine (i.e. an infinitive with +zu+, see S. 1, N. 2), =the object in the principal clause is frequently supplied by the pronoun +es+, which then may be called the grammatical object.= This is more particularly the case when special emphasis is given to the verb contained in the principal clause; as—
He liked to hear good music.
+Er ~liebte es~, gute Musik ~zu hören~.+
The deed proves, that she speaks the truth.
+Die That ~beweist es~, daß sie die Wahrheit spricht.+
Section 52.
THE WHITE SHIP.



