German composition : $b A theoretical and practical guide to the art of translating English prose into German · Hermann Lange

Chapter 2

Chapter 65 of 173 · 2 min read

The cobbler was there himself, spectacles on nose, an old shoe between his (S. 43, N. 9) knees, the massive forehead and firm mouth indicating great determination of character, and, beneath his bushy eyebrows, benevolence gleamed out on a number of poor ragged boys and girls who stood at their lessons round the busy cobbler. My curiosity was awakened; and in the inscription I read how this man, John Pounds, a cobbler in Portsmouth, took pity on the multitude of poor ragged children left by ministers and magistrates, and ladies and gentlemen, to go to ruin in the streets—how, like a good shepherd, he gathered in these wretched outcasts—how he had trained them to God and the world—and how, while earning his daily bread by the sweat of his brow, he had rescued from misery and saved to society not less than five hundred of these gentlemen. I felt ashamed of myself. I felt reproved for the little I had done. My feelings were touched. I was astonished at the man’s achievements; and I well remember, in the enthusiasm of the moment, saying to my companion (and I have seen in my cooler and calmer moments no reason for unsaying the saying): “That man is an honour to humanity, and deserves the greatest monument ever raised within the shores of Britain.”

The — himself, +Da saß der Schuhflicker, wie er leibte und lebte+.

spectacles, +die Brille+; on, +auf+, with the def. art.

broad.

indicating = gave evidence of (zeugen von).

benevolence — cobbler = shone forth (erglänzen) a pair of benevolent eyes with which he looked (blicken) upon a number (+Anzahl+, f.) of poor, ragged (+zerlumpt+) boys and girls who learned their lessons (+Aufgabe+, f.) and stood around the busy (= industrious) cobbler. To stand around a person, +um einen herum´stehen+.

to take pity on a person, +sich jemandes erbarmen+, with gen.

Use the gen. of the adjectives.

left — streets = which ministers (+Geistliche+) and magistrates (+Obrigkeit+, f.) had left (+überlas´sen+) to their ruin in (+auf+) the streets. Read App. § 17.

After ‘how’ follows the subject ‘he’ according to S. 66, N. 15.

wretched = unfortunate; gathered in = assembled around himself, +um sich her versammelte+.

to train, +erzie´hen+; to, +für+.

+und wie er sie, während er ... verdiente.+

by — brow, +im Schweiße seines Angesichtes+, which place after ‘daily bread’.

to rescue from misery, +aus dem Elend ziehen+. The auxiliary verb, which must be used in the Subjunctive, according to App. §§ 28 and 30, may be omitted in the intermediate clauses of this long period, and placed but once at the end of the entire passage.

Use the dat. of the def. art.

The word ‘gentlemen’ is best used in its unaltered form in this passage. It should be placed in inverted commas.

to feel ashamed of oneself, +sich beschämt fühlen+.

Say ‘The little (+was+) I had done was to me (+mir+) a reproach’.

feelings = heart.

I well remember = I know yet very well.

Say ‘that I said in the enthusiasm of the moment’, etc.

+das Gesagte zu widerrufen.+

+macht der Menschheit Ehre.+

= which ever (+je+) has been raised within the British Isles.

Section 125.

DR. GUTHRIE ON RAGGED SCHOOLS.